New chapter. Sorta. The chapter in draft was getting too long so I cut the first half as its own. Took a while for beta-readers to get back to me though.
As always, feedback is appreciated =P
New chapter. Sorta. The chapter in draft was getting too long so I cut the first half as its own. Took a while for beta-readers to get back to me though.
As always, feedback is appreciated =P