What is the price of a river?

Battles of the 6th Trinitian-Tauheed Holy War.

Battles of the 6th Trinitian-Tauheed Holy War.

I'm still tempted to use something like that as chapter title instead. But alas, here's the new Daybreak chapter.

Vote here if you enjoyed it.

Maps for this chapter are a little lacking. I'm still trying to figure on how to map a battlefront of this size and complexity. Meanwhile, I'm having fun with airbrushes for the topography.

Music used as inspiration include:

The Rzhev poem (short version) Kaede mentions in chapter.

A note that I've been editing the crap out of chapters 10 and 11 out of dissatisfaction (and still not done) -- mostly in the scenes where they figure on pulling Sylv out of depression. But if you had any thoughts of where it doesn't feel 'right' back when you read it, feel free to share.

 

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  1. Truth

    I actually haven't read this in a while.... I'm waiting for enough chapters to binge lol

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    1. AoriiAorii Post author

      annnnd as I click through them, I realized I post the wrong link to the Sabaton song (facepalm).
      If there's one recommendation I suggest 'discovering', it's that one... because gosh, those lyrics.

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  2. Evil Twin2146

    You really do want that top spot.
    Also are those crossed swords or scissors.

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    1. AoriiAorii Post author

      Crossed sabers.
      Meh, I just want the free advertisement ^^
      Most of the fiction on that list are superhero serials so comparison doesn't say much anyway. Besides, I don't update enough to grab the top spot xD (since votes reset after 7 days, only fiction with an update cycle faster than per week can stay up there).

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      1. Hakurei06Hakurei06

        Wouldn't say most, but it is a sizable chunk. I blame Worm. On the contrary, there's also a sizable chunk of fantasy fiction.

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      2. Evil Twin2146

        I was actually just referring to the top spot on Krytyk's blog. Bout half a day after their translation came out and you released this.

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  3. Truffle

    Thanks for the new chapter I can't wait to finish reading chapter 12 and start on this one =D

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