New chapter. Sorta. The chapter in draft was getting too long so I cut the first half as its own. Took a while for beta-readers to get back to me though.
As always, feedback is appreciated =P
Daybreak Update
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The latest in machine translation
Seeing as translation is a pretty big deal in this community, I thought you might be interested in this video. The timestamped url (at 8:18; segment ends around 10:00, so very short) should redirect you to the exact moment with the presenter begins talking about their recent upgrades to auto-translation.
NGGHHHHH.
I'm back, and I have souvenirs from hell. Who's happy...?
Yup, let's get straight to the release stuffs. I have been working and doing stuff around the house while the weather is still good so I haven't had much time. But this chapter is fairly short so I did it quickly the moment I found some time. I hope you enjoy it~. So, to the link.
PS: I ran out of prank/funny links and stuffs to link through the illustration, so I'll be linking stuff I have been playing, watching or listening recently. Like, games or songs I really liked. I'll be keeping it to Japanese themed stuffs (like visual novels, for one). To start with one of the VNs I really liked recently. Well, just expect more varied stuffs. Questions welcome.
As always, make sure to support the author and the publisher by purchasing the books. Especially that the author seems to be writing something new now.
——Krytyk
Minor Updates
Just a few minor updates for Daybreak to announce:
- Rewrote the third scene in v3ch10 (the tactical meeting after Cecylia's encounter with Lotharin racism). I do have the habit of editing a lot and ch10/ch11 is being pulled on especially for being unsatisfactory in my mind. You can check it out or wait till later when the volume is finished and all the major edits have gone in.
- Updated battle maps for v3ch13 - hopefully this version is less overcrowded / confusing. You may need to refresh page to see it.
- Posted the Hyperion military structure/organization as a special chapter - I've tried to discuss this in story several times but... the writing just always feels so dry. Thus it'll just be attached as a supplementary information for those interested.
Comments on any of the changes would be welcomed, whether you liked or disliked it. Chapter 13 - the battle of Gwilen River - received a lot less comments than usual, so I've been wondering if people disliked it, found it confusing, inconsistent, or anything like that?
The Beginning of The End
Such a good occasion, but I have nothing to write. Why is it always like this? Oh well.
Might as well drop the link right away and add the "buy novels" spam part.
Enjoy yourself.
Make sure to support the authors and publishers by purchasing the books in original language. Don't count on English releases, they might - or might not come.
——Krytyk