New chapter. Sorta. The chapter in draft was getting too long so I cut the first half as its own. Took a while for beta-readers to get back to me though.
As always, feedback is appreciated =P
New chapter. Sorta. The chapter in draft was getting too long so I cut the first half as its own. Took a while for beta-readers to get back to me though.
As always, feedback is appreciated =P
Seeing as translation is a pretty big deal in this community, I thought you might be interested in this video. The timestamped url (at 8:18; segment ends around 10:00, so very short) should redirect you to the exact moment with the presenter begins talking about their recent upgrades to auto-translation.
Just a few minor updates for Daybreak to announce:
Comments on any of the changes would be welcomed, whether you liked or disliked it. Chapter 13 - the battle of Gwilen River - received a lot less comments than usual, so I've been wondering if people disliked it, found it confusing, inconsistent, or anything like that?
I'm still tempted to use something like that as chapter title instead. But alas, here's the new Daybreak chapter.
Vote here if you enjoyed it.
Maps for this chapter are a little lacking. I'm still trying to figure on how to map a battlefront of this size and complexity. Meanwhile, I'm having fun with airbrushes for the topography.
Music used as inspiration include:
Not much to say -- here's Chapter 12.
Next one will take a while. I'm on business trip all next week and the topic will simply be difficult.
Also Daybreak is now also on WebFictionGuide. So give it a vote if you enjoy it ^^
Thanks to Hachi for the fanart.